Lialee‘s+Introduction+Draft

First Draft: As a girl, what confused me for a long time is that there are only a few presidents who are women in every single country. In all ages women are regarded as the representative of weakness and frailness when comparing with man. The existence of prejudice in women leads to a number of right and livelihood issues towards women up till now. But why should women live under men’s control? More and more women are willing to fight for their freedom. Ellen Johnson Sirleaf, the president of Liberia, is the first woman to be elected to lead a country in modern African history. She and Leymah Gbowee and Tawakkul Karman won the 2011 Nobel Peace Prize for their struggle for the safety of women and for women’s rights she stress the need for women to become participants on an equal footing with men in peace processes and in peace work. It is no exaggeration to say that women are not worse than men in such a developed society for their sensitive and comprehensive smell towards things around them.

Second Draft:

As a girl, what has confused me for a long time is that there are only a few presidents who are women in every single country. Throughout the ages women have been regarded as the representatives of weakness and frailness when comparing with men. The existence of prejudice towards women has led to a number of right and livelihood issues towards women up till now. Most of the women in ancient societies were required to follow every suggestion from their husbands or fathers.The most irrational one states that a woman should be ashamed that she is a woman. But why should women live under men’s control? More and more women are willing to fight for their freedom. Ellen Johnson Sirleaf, the president of Liberia, is the first woman to be elected to lead a country in modern African history. She and Leymah Gbowee and Tawakkul Karman won the 2011 Nobel Peace Prize for their struggle for the safety of women and for women’s rights. She stressed the need for women to become participants on an equal footing with men in peace processes and in peace work. However, self-protect happened to Mayella Violet Ewell who is one of the key figures in the novel ‘__To Kill A Mocking Bird__’ by Harper Lee. Mayella’s behavior leaded to a man’s death. Should we be proud of this kind of independence? It is no exaggeration to say that women with rational approaches are not worse than men in such a developed society for their sensitive and comprehensive smell towards things around them.