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Lia you have a very strong first paragraph! You have a great attention grabber and connection but your thesis needs work. Do not worry about Mayella for now, save that for the Body paragraphs. Instead focus on using your connection to investigate and explore the question in your attention grabber. How come Women STILL are being kept out of power? Clearly their is still prejudice against women in modern society. Use your example to show in your thesis how women can go against this prejudice and gain power.


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