Shelwin+Essay+Draft

DRAFT#1
===Unfair,discrimination,it exists this world for a long time,especially for women.When it comes to Women,some people always think them not worth doing anything.From their perspective,it is not necessary for women to exist in this world.Like the movie "A time to kill "by Joel Schumacher,there are no guarantees for black men's right,they are even regarded as nigger.They must be shame of themselves.But nowadys,this situation changes a lot.Women have a greater and greate impact for our daily life.Men and Women get the equal right gradually.Therefore,we should be proud of Women.===

I change another topic for my essay.

Empathy and Fear
=== In China,there is a very famous proverbd which is ‘ If you are patient in one moment of anger, you will escape a hundred days of sorrow’.In fact,no matter where we stay,we will always see different arguments,fights,even wars.Why those bad things happen everyday?Consider the situation of current society and relationship between different people,no matter they are friends or enemies,it is common that they always have contrasting opinions.Under this circumstance,arguments and fights probably will happen frequently.At this time,empathy plays a significant role.Connect it with a famous story in China,the name of story is ‘ offer a humble apology’ by qian sima,this story represent a gap solved between two generals,at the beginning,they are jealous of each other and have a big contradiction.However,another country is marching aginst their own country.As the most important people in the war,one of two generals apologizes his mistakes for another generals.So the gap between them was eliminated .They also help their country win this war finally.So in order to get success,we should handle different tough problems by cooperating with others,it may need us always have empathy on others’ perspective to consider the questions,only if we have the same goal can we make success easily. === === To kills a mocking bird by Harper Lee is a book indicated a young girl Scout Finch and his family’s story in deep south.The main character Atticus have a good example of empathy.His behaviour teaches us how can we use empathy to eliminate the gap between people.For example,in chapter three,Scout rubs walter’s nose in the dirt for getting her in trouble.Atticus told scout“You never really understand a person until you consider things from his point of view …until you climb into his skin and walk around in it”(p38 Harper Lee).It indicates the importance of empathy,every people like Walter may made some mistakes,we should not use the way like Scout,it just will make the things worse.In others words,at the beginning,Scout just want to help Walter.However,depend on her behaviour in chapter 3.She is sometimes indeed very impulsive.It probably result from she can not have an empathy on others.In addition,another example can also show the importance of empathy.When the trial went on, Bob Ewell can not be satisfied the result of the trail,so he found Atticus,threatening and spitting on him for he defended for a black man.But Atticus did not care about this, he always have an empathy on others.He think if it can make Ewell ===