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Intro First Draft 'What a poor guy! Give some money to him.' This is the most of people's first reaction when they see the beggars. People may feel empathy for these people deu to their excellent performance. In fact, they can earn money by their own hands easily. And now, think it again, will we still feel empathy for him? Absolutely not. So, are all people in the world need us empathy? While there are maney examples from the daily news which touch our heart and make us feel empathy for these things. Consider the news 'How far can a sponsor go in setting conditions on recipients?' by Wu Jiao. The title shocks everyone when people read it, and the content makes people feel empathy first then hate. The famous actress in China called Sun Li who helped a poor university student to finish school. Most of us may feel empathy for this student's family status and supported what Sun Li did. However, as time went by, this boy asked more money from Sun Li. And the money he got was far beyond 6000 yuan($768) per month. It is quite a great living expenses. After some days Sun Li knew that the extra money he asked for was not for study, he used nearly all this money to his girlfriend. When people knew the truth, no one felt empathy to him any more, instead was hate. Everyone in the world have a kind of emotions called empathy. And we need feel empathy with this people who have a poor life even poor experiences rather than the 'poor' people who use others' empathy to get money.

Intro Second Draft Happy, sad, love and hate are the most popular emotions which people have in daily life. However, have you ever thout about another important emotion that is the weak point for people, called empathy. Someone may utilizes this weak point to get profit, such as money. So, are all people in the world need us empathy? While there are many examples from the daily news which touch our heart and make us feel empathy. Consider the news 'How far can a sponsor go in setting conditions on recipients?' by Wu Jiao. The title shocks everyone when people read it, and the content makes people feel empathy first then hate. The famous actress in China called Sun Li who helped a poor university student to finish school. Most of us may felt empathy for this student's family status and supported what Sun Li did. However, as time went by, this boy asked more money from Sun Li. And the money he got was far beyond 6000 yuan($768) per month. It is quite a great living expenses. After some days Sun Li knew that the extra money he asked for was not for study, he used nearly all this money to his girlfriend. When people knew the truth, no one felt empathy to him any more, instead was hate due to his dishonest. To be honest, empathy exists naturally when everyone born. And this emotion may appear only as we meet some poor guys or hear some unfortunate experiences. Because of empathy, we try our best to help this people who we feel empathy for. At the same time, some 'poor' people can let their dreams come true only by using others' special emotion called empathy. This shocking way let everybody hate them rather than empathy.