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WOW! Great attention grabber!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just have someone check the grammar. For example your first sentence " The riddle is a sit roundabout: a man and his son go to travel but they get accident in the way" could simply say "A man and his son are in a car accident." Use short and clear sentences to show what you mean. You are right to use this riddle as your connection it works very well. But instead of talking about Tom Robinson in your introduction (you will do this in your body) focus on your example more. Why do we assume the doctor is a man even though in our society ore women are becoming doctors than men? What does that show about our prejudice? You thesis is very unclear but it should be easy to fix. Look at your example: do you consider yourself sexist? And yet did you assume it was a male doctor?

Level 1 thesis: No one wants to be racist or sexist, but we all have prejudices in some of our assumptions.

WHY?

Level 2 Thesis:

Overall mark: **Level 2+**