Mary's+Introduction+Draft

The First Draft: If we make the empathy to someone, it will make us think that those people are very pitiful. So when are we going to make the empathy to others? If you cannot get the similar feeling from others who get into the deep trouble, your empathy will not be given to those kinds of people. To be honest, I think that empathy is based on the understanding of others’ condition. A movie is named “Taken”, which is produced by Luc Besson and directed by Pierre Morel. At first, the father in the film really could not understand her daughter why her daughter wanted to go abroad alone, so he did not agree her daughter to go. However, her daughter went to France with a friend, her father really worried about that and at that time he started to made the empathy to her daughter and tried his best to get his daughter out of trouble. His empathy also gave him much more power to solve everything so soon as possible, which was the most proper time to his empathy and saved his daughter at the same time. Personally, the empathy for a person needs to be shown in a right time or situation, for example, we are facing the situation that we are going to lose that person in a short time. In other word, the death seems very near to us. At that time, the empathy can be seen the useful empathy, which can help us to solve the problem or get the people out of trouble more quickly. The empathy will happen, especially the emergency happens.

The Second Draft: Empathy, which could be made by everybody in the world, seems very normal in our life. But not everyone can get the empathy whenever they want or need. The same people may get the empathy or not if they are in the different condition. So when and who are we going to make the empathy to others? If you cannot get the similar feeling from others who get into the deep trouble, your empathy will not be given to those kinds of people. The most important reason for making the empathy is that empathy is based on the understanding of others’ condition. A movie is named “Taken”, which is produced by Luc Besson and directed by Pierre Morel. At first, the father in the film really could not understand her daughter why her daughter wanted to go abroad alone, so he did not agree her daughter to go. However, her daughter went to France with a friend and was kidnapped by others, her father really worried about that and at that time he started to made the empathy to her daughter and tried his best to get his daughter out of trouble. His empathy also gave him much more power to solve everything so soon as possible, which was the most proper time to show his empathy and saved his daughter at the same time. To be honest, the empathy for a person needs to be shown in a right time or situation, for example, we are facing the situation that we are going to lose that person ， who is your relative or friends ， in a short time. In other word, the death seems very near to us. At that time, the empathy can be seen the useful empathy, which can help us to solve the problem or get the people out of the trouble more quickly. The empathy will happen, especially the emergency happens and it also may happen around the people who have some relationship with us.